Rachel Takes Ariane’s Photo

When last we left our duo, Ariane had volunteered to model for photos for Rachel’s photography class.


“Thanks for doing your own hair and makeup,” says Rachel, “I was going to arrange a trip to Heidi’s Salon.”

“No problem, figured I should do it myself if you want to take my picture.” says Ariane.

“So, tell me about this photography assignment,” asks Ariane.

“Well, the assignement is a study in low color contrast,” Rachel explains.

“Which means what?” asks Ariane.

“I’m supposed to take a photo that is dominated by one color,” Rachel explains, “and I need 4 elements with that color.  

“I’m going with an orange/brown color, I figured it would be easy since it is still autumn with orange and brown leaves in the trees.”

Rachel and Ariane in the car

“So trees are one element.”

“I’m planning on taking the picture during sunset. The scarf you are wearing is 3, and your skin lit by the setting sun is 4.”

“My skin? So I’m posing nude then?”

“You said you were OK with it.”.

“Yeah, I guess. So where are we going?” asks Ariane. 

“We are going to go to Echo Canyon State Park.”

“Kind of a public place for a nude photoshoot isn’t it?”

“Don’t worry I got a permit for nude photography.”

“Didn’t know there was such a thing,” says Ariane, “Also it is a bit chilly today.”

“What do you mean? It’s a beautiful 10 degrees Celsius. Besides, the sunset window is only about 15 minutes long, so you won’t be naked for too long.”

“OK, fine, we’ll go to Echo Canyon,” says Ariane, “I know a faster way there, do you want to take a shortcut?”

“Sure, why not?”

Ariane going off-road

Ariane reaches a section with few trees and drives her SUV off the road.

“Hey, you can’t just leave the road,” exclaims Rachel.

“This is an all terrain vehicle, it is built for off-road driving. Besides we are just going over that hill.” answers Ariane.

Dodging trees

The other side of the hill turns out to have more trees which Ariane has to drive through.

Rachel is panicking, but Ariane loves this kind of stuff.

“Don’t worry, I do this all the time,” says Ariane, “Besides we are almost back on pavement, so to speak.”

Driving on a rough road

“What road are we on?” asks Rachel, “This road is not on my GPS app.”

“It wouldn’t be, this is an old highway decomissioned a couple of decades ago.”

Ariane continues, “As you can tell, it’s rough going, lots of pot holes, but it will drop us off at the old Echo Canyon campground.”

“Wow, that is very convenient. That is a mile hike of switchbacks into the canyon we don’t have to do,” says Rachel rather impressed. “Why did they decommission it, seems very useful.”

“Mostly because a section of the road had to be rebuilt every time the river overflowed, which usually happens every spring.”

“Yes, that would get expensive,” says Rachel.

Rachel pancking Ariane Smiling

“Wait! That means that there is no road ahead!”

“Only a couple of meters, we should be able to clear it.” says Ariane reassuredly, “unless it got bigger since the last time I did this three years ago.”

“That’s not reassuring.”

“Hang on!”

Airborne Jeep

The SUV is airborne for about a full second as it clears the gap, but it seems a lot longer to Rachel as she screams her disapproval.

They land on an enbankment, a short distance from the park boundary.

“See, now wasn’t that fun?”, asked Ariane reassuredly. “Look, we’re here.”

Rachel looks back at the jump they made, and it wasn’t as death defying as she imagined.

“Ariane, you are one crazy bitch.”

“Thanks, I like doing daring things sometimes,” says Ariane. “Lucky for you that list includes public nudity.”

Bridge Studio

A short distance into the park, there is a bridge overlooking a pond. Rachel decides this is the best place to take her photos.

“I’m setting up multiple cameras. Both will take pictures every 5 seconds. This one will change its aperature as the sky gets darker, and this second one will adjust the shutter speed. These are both likely to lose focus in different ways as the sky gets darker, but it will triple the number of photos to choose from.” says Rachel.

“I have no idea what you just said.” says Ariane.

“I am going to take a lot of photos in a short time, and we will figure out the best one to submit,” says Rachel.

“Ah, got it.”

park ranger

A Park Ranger comes by, “Good afternoon ladies, looks like you are setting up for a photo shoot?”

Rachel answers, “Yes, it is a college class project.”

“Well the rule is you can use a hand held camera all you want, but to set up extra stuff you need a permit,” says the Park Ranger.

“Sure, here it is.” says Rachel pulling a paper out of her pocket.

park ranger

“Interesting, nude photography?”

“Yes, it’s allowed with a permit, I checked.” says Rachel. 

The Park Ranger looks over the permit. “Well your paperwork is in order but you still need permission from the park ranger, which is me.”

“I see, so can we?” asks Rachel a little scared she will be rejected.

“How long will it take?”

“A half hour tops, we are trying to catch the sunset.”

“Well its off season on a school day, and I haven’t seen any minors,” says the Ranger, “so I’ll allow it. Just no “erotic” or “pornographic” photos, OK?”

“Thanks, says a relieved Rachel, “Sunset is at 4:57.  We’ll be out by 5:00.”

“I’ll go block access to the bridge then,” says the Park Ranger, “good luck with the photos.”

Bridge Studio

Let me get some test shots,” suggests Rachel. “You’ll need to stand in the middle of the bridge near the rail, Feel free to sit on the rail if you want.”

“What should I do?” asks Ariane.

“Just pose how ever you want, cover yourself or let it all hang out is fine. Just change it every few seconds.”

“Also I may ask for different expressions. Smile? Pout? Distant stare?” Ariane tries different looks as Rachel calls them out. “Good!” says Rachel.

background view

“Hey look we are getting some clouds in the sky,” says Rachel excitedly.

 “Wow, that’s lucky,” observes Ariane. “Clear skies do not produce good sunsets.”

“The lucky part is I know someone who can control the weather,” says Rachel. “And right on time, too.  They are already turning orange.”

Before Ariane could ask for an explanation, Rachel got into photographer mode. “Go ahead and take your clothes off.”

“You don’t want to buy me dinner first?” jokes Ariane.

Rachel taking photos

Ariane gets undressed wearing nothing but a scarf. 

For the next 20 minutes or so, Rachel barks orders to Ariane on how to stand, where to look, and what facial expression she should use.

“And that is sunset,” states Rachel as the light gets too dim to take more photos without the flash going off. “You can put your clothes back on.”


The park ranger and a few hikers watching from the sidelines applaud.

After sunset they pack up and go home. It is dark as they “four wheel it” back to the broken highway, but that is what all the extra spotlights on her SUV are for. 

Rachel is a bit more relaxed on the trip home, trusting Ariane to drive as she scans through the digital photos on the camera.

 A few days later Rachel invites Ariane downtown to the “unveiling” of the finished photo.

Museum gala

Rachel greets Ariane as she comes into the downtown Art Museum. “Hello Ariane, glad you can make it.”

“Thanks for the invite, so what is this “Young Artists Gala” and why did I have to dress up for it?”

“It’s an event the museum puts on annually this time of year to introduce their Young Local Artists exhibit that they do until the end of the year. The photo I took of you will be on display.”

“The NUDE photo of me is going in the museum?  Oh great!”

Rachel smiles, “Don’t worry it turned out fine.”

“For a fancy prestigious event, the crowd seems a bit small,” Ariane observes.

“True, there are only three type that come to these things: The artists, their guests, and patrons looking for cheap art or cheap young artists.”

“Like that blonde woman over there,” continues Rachel, “she buys art for The Ellison Group to hang in lobbies of their real estate holdings.”

“So a picture of me nude could hang in a hotel lobby?” asks Ariane.

“Unlikely, they usually stay away from nude photos in lobbys, unless they want it for the Top Club.”

Museum announcement

The gala introduces numerous artists and shows their work. Drawing, painting and design work seems to dominate, but Rachel finally gets her turn. 

The museum guide introduces her. “Our next young artist is a famous supermodel who is looking to move behind the camera, meet Rachel Spahr.”

Ariane Modest Nude

The photo appears on the monitor behind Rachel as she speaks. The crowd reacts a little shocked as it is the only “nude” picture featured at the show.

“So this is the picture I submitted, it was an assignment to use minimal color.  

So it is a naked woman in an orange scarf taken during sunset, which blends with the autumnal scene in the background.”

The small crowd applauses politely.

After her presentation, Rachel and Ariane check out the framed photo in the exhibit.

“So what do you think?” asks Rachel.

“Not as bad as I was suspecting, at least I’m in a modest pose,” says Ariane.

“Yeah, good thing we had those extra cameras automatically taking pictures. The best picture I got on the hand held was a full frontal nude.”

“Oh God!” reacts Ariane.

gala react

“Well the final picture is nice. It would look very nice hanging in my kitchen,” Ariane finally said.

“Oh yeah it would, an orange picture in an orange room.” says Rachel taking the compliment, “I’ll send you a signed copy if you want.”

“Thanks, I’d like that.”

There is a lull in the conversation.

“I studied some Art History,” says Ariane, “If you want we could tour the museum?”

“Or, we could go back to my place,” says Rachel.

Ariane smiles. They leave together.



Note: Part 3 online used to be a choose options game. I am temporarily taking it down while I work on a downloadable version of this story that will include additional paths. For now I want the online version to be just one version of the story. I may bring it back once I am done making the other paths. The above version best corresponds to the part 4 story.

3 thoughts on “Rachel Takes Ariane’s Photo

  1. Robert April 29, 2017 / 3:40 am

    I can’t wait for this game.

  2. Mark August 20, 2017 / 1:45 pm

    Will it work as a game? The male player seemed to have a much harder time of it, while these 2 just flow so easily. Which works great as a story, but as a game I don’t know – where’s the challenge?

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